显得弥足珍贵。 　　从这个例子我们可以看出，平常的话题，我们也可以发掘出深刻的主题来。 　　二、语言生动形象 　　这是指文章的描写功夫。好的记叙文应该充满着生动形象的描写，精细入微的刻画：人物的语言、行为、心理，事件的动态，景物的变化……可想而知，，这样的文章一定会获得高分。 　　如《打工》一文，在描写语言上就很见工夫：“我努力地干着与我年龄极不相称的活，拚命地抬起二三百斤的铁笼。超重的负荷压得我浑身骨骼‘吱吱’地响，我咬紧牙努力地把自己的脊背弯成一张弓，两只脚死命地扣紧地面，两只眼球鼓成了弹丸，时刻都有射出眼眶的可能。太阳直射在我身上，背上的皮肤仿佛被烤焦了，随时都有撕裂的可能。汗水淌进了我的眼里，辣得睁不开眼，而鞋子里早已像和泥一般滑，我就这样拚命地撑着……”这段文字通过生动形象的描写，精细入微的刻画，传神地写出了“我”打工的体验，充分表现了作者高超的语言表达能力。 　　三、技巧熟练 　　文章是用小学生语言文字表现主题的，如何使语言文字达到最佳表达效果，就以看写作技巧了。一般而言，写作技巧包括详略、表现用法(象征、以物喻人、过渡言志等)、体裁安排、顺序、点题、过渡响应等。同学们可以参见本书的“中考作文满分技巧指导”。 　　总之，一篇优秀的记叙文，一定是包含了上述因素的，希望同学们在日常的记叙文练习过程中多加体会，不断提升自己记叙文写作的实力。  

点来。另外，在观察的时候，还要按一定的顺序，或由近及远，又远到近;或从上到下，从下到上;或从里到外，从外到里;或从中间到两边，从两边到中间;或从整体到局部，从局部到整体。按照这样顺序去观察，彩绘全面，描写时彩绘有条理。 　　(三)要做记录 　　学生游览的时候，看的东西多，去的地方也比较广，一时很难记住，就是当时记住了，过后也难免遗忘，不利于组织作文。为了避免这种情况，游览时要求学生带上笔和本，边观察、边记录，随看随记，就不会忘记了，写作文的时候还便于选择。另外，公园和修蓝区的有些景物带有介绍。例如，辞经管是何时建造的，经历了哪些发展阶段，占地面积是多少，包含着怎样动人的故事和美丽的传说等等。这些资料很有可能成为学生作文时的宝贵材料，应小学生三年级学该要学生记录下来。在游览之后，要求学生及时地把自己观察到的和记录的材料整理归类，看看哪些是属于作文需要的材料，哪些需要详写，哪些需要略写，做到心中有书，为下一步作文做好准备工作。可以要求学生按照下面的表格整理材料。 　　想要写好一篇游记不是一件简单的事情，毕竟作为描述类的文章，很多小学生都容易写出流水账，那样的游记怎么会吸引人呢，如果你也在为此而烦恼，那么就好好阅读本篇文章吧，相信会对你有所帮助的。

学得的知识通过有效的加工来组织成为作文。下面沪江小编就为大家分享一些写作的技巧，供参考借鉴。 　　掌握如何写好篇章的技巧： 　　(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局 　　开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 　　正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 　　结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 　　要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。 　　(2)确定主题句 　　主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 　　写主题句应注意以下几点： 　　①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 　　②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 　　③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 　　下面我们通过例子来学习、体会“主题句” 　　[范例1] 　　Something unpleasant happened to us on our way to the beach. In the morning, while we were waiting to buy train tickets in the railway station, a bus driver came over to us. He told us he also was going to the beach, the ride was cheap, and the bus was air-conditioned. We felt grateful and got on his bus. As we were talking happily on the way, the bus suddenly stopped. The driver said he needed two hours to repair the engine. While he was working on the engine, he turned off the air-conditioner. He actually took four hours to finish his job, and we spent the whole morning sweating in the heat! 　　[范例2] 　　I am an active boy and I talk more than listen. When I talk with my friends, I'm always ready to express myself. I‘m not afraid to tell others what I think. I am usually the focus of the attention because I often have lots of ideas that interest everyone. In my opinion, people should share and exchange each other's ideas. But when I am with the quiet people, I feel the air is frozen. I’m always trying to find a topic and start a conversation. In this way, people will like me and feel happy. 　　In a word, I am optimistic and active and I can make everybody as confident as me. 　　(二)巧用连接词——连接上下文的关键 　　要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 　　下面请你认真学习并学会运用下列常见连接词 　　表示罗列增加: 　　First, second, third, 　　First, then / next, after that / next, finally 　　For one thing … for another…, 　　On (the) one hand…on the other hand, 　　Besides / what's more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, 　　Especially / In particular, 　　表示时间顺序: 　　now, at present, recently, 　　after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, 　　at first, in the beginning, to begin with, 　　later, next, finally, 　　immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment 　　form now on, from then on, 　　at the same time, meanwhile, 　　till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 　　表示解释说明: 　　now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover 　　furthermore, in fact, actually 　　表示转折关系: 　　but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other 　　hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all, 　　表示并列关系: 　　or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor, for 　　表示因果关系: 　　because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that 　　表示条件关系: 　　as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless, once, when 　　表示让步关系: 　　though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, 　　whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom) 　　表示举例: 　　for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example 　　表示比较: 　　be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as, 　　表示目的: 　　for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, 　　表示强调: 　　in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, 　　obviously, above all, 　　表示概括归纳: 　　in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, to sum up, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, as we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion 　　上述是沪江小编结合小学英语作文写作的特点所总结的写出好的作文的技巧，希望这些能够帮助同学们更小学生来说，写出一篇好的作文并非一件难事，只要大家掌握了相应的写作技巧和方法，就可以将自己所学得的知识通过有效的加工来组织成为作文。下面沪江小编就为大家分享一些写作的技巧，供参考借鉴。 　　掌握如何写好篇章的技巧： 　　(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局 　　开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 　　正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 　　结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 　　要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。 　　(2)确定主题句 　　主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 　　写主题句应注意以下几点： 　　①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 　　②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 　　③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 　　下面我们通过例子来学习、体会“主题句” 　　[范例1] 　　Something unpleasant happened to us on our way to the beach. In the morning, while we were waiting to buy train tickets in the railway station, a bus driver came over to us. He told us he also was going to the beach, the ride was cheap, and the bus was air-conditioned. We felt grateful and got on his bus. As we were talking happily on the way, the bus suddenly stopped. The driver said he needed two hours to repair the engine. While he was working on the engine, he turned off the air-conditioner. He actually took four hours to finish his job, and we spent the whole morning sweating in the heat! 　　[范例2] 　　I am an active boy and I talk more than listen. When I talk with my friends, I'm always ready to express myself. I‘m not afraid to tell others what I think. I am usually the focus of the attention because I often have lots of ideas that interest everyone. In my opinion, people should share and exchange each other's ideas. But when I am with the quiet people, I feel the air is frozen. I’m always trying to find a topic and start a conversation. In this way, people will like me and feel happy. 　　In a word, I am optimistic and active and I can make everybody as confident as me. 　　(二)巧用连接词——连接上下文的关键 　　要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 　　下面请你认真学习并学会运用下列常见连接词 　　表示罗列增加: 　　First, second, third, 　　First, then / next, after that / next, finally 　　For one thing … for another…, 　　On (the) one hand…on the other hand, 　　Besides / what's more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, 　　Especially / In particular, 　　表示时间顺序: 　　now, at present, recently, 　　after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, 　　at first, in the beginning, to begin with, 　　later, next, finally, 　　immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment 　　form now on, from then on, 　　at the same time, meanwhile, 　　till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 　　表示解释说明: 　　now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover 　　furthermore, in fact, actually 　　表示转折关系: 　　but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other 　　hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all, 　　表示并列关系: 　　or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor, for 　　表示因果关系: 　　because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that 　　表示条件关系: 　　as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless, once, when 　　表示让步关系: 　　though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, 　　whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom) 　　表示举例: 　　for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example 　　表示比较: 　　be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as, 　　表示目的: 　　for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, 　　表示强调: 　　in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, 　　obviously, above all, 　　表示概括归纳: 　　in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, to sum up, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, as we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion 　　上述是沪江小编结合小学英语作文写作的特点所总结的写出好的作文的技巧，希望这些能够帮助同学们更深入地认识作文写作，然后写出好的作文来。  

小学生来说，考试是一种检验自己知识掌握程度的关键方式。那么对于学生而是答案的主要内容。一般说分数相加比只答其中一道题分数要高。如果是理解分析性的题目，可以采用只列要点、简例，不作具体分析的方法。要点、简例用提纲表述，不阐述它们之间的联系，也不考虑语言组织。这类题目一般按要点、简例分析几方面评分，答了要点便有要点分，如再加一具简例，则丰富了内容，分数就更高。同时，应养成复查的习惯，复查是大战后打扫战场。解题犹如战斗，讲究紧张，速战速决;复查是打扫战场，要求冷静，所谓冷静就是从原有的思路中解脱出来，从当事者变为旁观者，对试卷做仔细审查、无情挑剔。要知道：当局者迷，旁观者清。应试者只有头脑清醒时，才能避免种种可以避免的遗憾。 　　考试是学生学习的基本环节之一，它是结学习效果的检查和评价，并从中起反馈作用。希望上述沪江小编与大家分享的方法能够切实帮助同学们更加自由地应对考试，并在考试中取得理想的成绩。  

文鸟飞走了，但“我”却不敢承认自己是“肇事者”，情急之下把责任推给年幼的弟弟，弟弟却为了“我”不愿将实情说出。结果是“我”痛感到自己的自私和渺小，流下了伤心、懊悔而真诚的泪水。首先你根据上述情节，想出一篇作文的主要内容，然后给它起出3个题目，从中选一个最好的。 　　上小学生来说，刚接触作文这方面的事情，很多同学文中沪江的小编用一些例子来给大家介绍了作文如何做才能够扣题，可以说是非常的实用，而且大家都可以很容易的理解，毕竟有例子，很多同学读起来就会简单很多，也能够很快的理解到扣题的方法，希望本篇文章能够对大家有用。