四六级考试是我们国家为了对现在大学生英语能力进行检测所设置的一门考试,通过这些考试也能够证明我们的英语水平达到的一定程度的要求。那么就四六级考试的作文部分而言,往往是我们丢分的“重灾区”。那么我们就应该对与作文部分进行好好的分析总结,在作文部分想办法进行分数的提高。在此我给大家进行例题的分析解析,希望大家从中能够有所收获。

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay。 Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture。 You are to make a choice between the two。 Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice。 You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。

破题思路:

第一段:话题描述。

第二段:表明观点+阐述原因。

第三段:观点结论。

参考范文:

Stated-owned business or Joint venture

Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice,which is truly a tough choice。 Students‘ opinions differ greatly on this issue。 Some hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a stated-owned business which will guarantee my life after retirement, but others take the attitude that a joint venture outweighs any other jobs as it may provide higher income for employees。

As to myself, I prefer the latter view。 A joint venture, especially a high-salary joint venture, exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me。 Although it might be impossible to make sure my retirement pension is good enough, high-salary is exactly what I need just now。 In my view, our career choices largely depend on where we want to stay for the rest of life。 For me, metropolis is the place where I can grasp loads of opportunities and achieve my personal dreams。 As I hold the view that live in the moment, not the future, and also in order to finance myself in some aspects such as the transportation, the house-renting, or social activities, a joint venture can satisfy my needs for the consumption I mentioned above。

In short, a joint venture is the first and only consideration in my choice of career。