大家可能最近都在准备大学六级英语考试,那么就这门考试而言,我们学生公认的最难部分就是作文,因为作文往往是我们与其他优秀学生拉开差距的地方。然而,部分考生却能够在作文部分取得满分。在此,我给大家列举出一篇满分作文,希望大家能够认真分析,并从中进行学习。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

命题分析:本题要求评论英国教士Thomas Fuller的一句名言:“知识是一种财富,但实践是打开财富的钥匙。”并要求可以给出一个或两个例子来阐述你的观点。显而易见,本题考查理论知识与实践技能之间的关系,这是雅思写作反复考察过的话题。

写作思路解析

1、本题首段应该通过理论知识与实践技能之间的关系引出主题;

2、第二段可以进行举例论证,列举自己参加兼职打工、志愿者活动等亲身经验证明实践技能的重要性;

3、尾段可以进行归纳结论或提出建议措施:一方面我们应该努力积累理论知识,另一方面我们应该积极培养自己的实践技能。

参考范文:

Would you want a doctor to operate on you who has only learned about operations from a textbook? The answer to this is obviously a resounding “No!” Knowledge gained from books must always be complemented by knowledge gained from actual experience, to be of real value。

For me actually practicing a particular action or experiment myself and experiencing the result, leaves a much deeper and lasting impression than what I get from simply reading or listening. If I read about how to write an essay or listened to someone talk about writing an essay, I still wouldn’t feel that I knew how to write an essay until I wrote one for myself. It is the case, however, that writing the essay would be based on the methods I learned intellectually. The same can be said for other skills, like sports, for example. A person can know all the rules of a game, associated skills and strategies, but until that person gets on a court with a ball in motion, the theory remains flat, useless。

To sum up, as to theoretical knowledge and practical skills, the latter is certainly more important. Just as British churchman Thomas Fuller put it, “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。”