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1. Just because the profound meaning hided behind..., because后加句子，because of 后加名词，所以这里because应该改为 because of。hide的过去分词是hidden。
2. ... are unable to eating ..., be unable to do sth, 把eating 改为eat。
3. ...as busy in work..., as可以引导原因状语从句，后加完整句子，固定搭配be busy doing sth。所以可以处理为as we are busy working...
4. ... far away home..., 缺少介词from, 改为far away from home。
5. ...spend a little time to think about..., spend的用法有 spend time on sth/spend time doing sth/spend time in doing sth。没有spend time to do sth。 所以to think about 改为thinking about.
6. 家，对你而言又有着怎样的意义，可以处理为，What does family mean to you?
7.  新加坡必将... 必将可以直接处理为will。
8. ...keeping loyalty in our respective duty..., keep后可直接加形容词，be loyal to sth固定搭配，介词用to，所以可以改为 ...keeping loyal to our respective duty...
9. 最后一句中， noy only拼错，成功的动词是succeed, 可以改为，which will not only succeed...; harmony的形容词是harmonious, 可以处理为 a big, harmonious and friendly family...
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