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1. ...that be jointed made...that引导的从句缺少谓语，be改为was。
2. ... both reality and demostrates our win-win idea...通常both A and B中，A和B的结构应该是对应的。这里reality是名词，and后面也应是名词。
3. ...since it covers 13 key field which including...13 key field用复数13 key fields; which引导定语从句，指代先行词key fields，从句中缺少谓语，可以改为which include。也可以去掉which, 改为13 key fields, including。
4. ...all parties of..party可以指党派，当事人，聚会。这里改parts。
5. ...With it is put in place...with后面一般加名词性的成分，不加句子。可以改为 If it is put in place...
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