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Such statistics can be associated with the important of education.
这样的统计数据可以与教育的重要性相联系。 importance重要性

For one thing,the postgraduate is characterized by less stress,which enable students in university to improve the competence of study and accumulate a variety of knowledge and experience.
一方面，研究生的特点是压力较低，这使大学生能够提高学习能力并积累各种知识和经验。
（普遍来看，研究生特点应该是压力较大）这句话说得不够简洁，可以改成
For one thing, postgraduate students are characterized by lower pressure, which enables them to improve their learning ability and accumulate various kinds of knowledge and experience.

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