同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《新版2019年7月N2-N1【签约班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
同学下次要把摘要写作要提交到班级作业帖，助教会批改反馈的
https://class.hujiang.com/18389454/homework

第一行which是多余的，去掉，不然整个句子没有主句。
第二行building是多余的，different from与……不同，because引导从句，后面加主语和谓语it was
第三行Various goods as well as machinery from all around the world were displayed.
注意这个语序，而且world要注意拼写
arrvied in England，加上介词
so…that应该是在同一句话的，所以that开头那句前面加句号，that小写
that it was possible to build，it is possible to do有可能做某事
exhibition前加the特指
where it remained 注意主语+谓语的语序，until引导从句，后面加主语和谓语it was
句子末尾要加上标点。


The Crystal Palace, which was built for the Great Exhibition
of 1851, was different from other buildings because it was made
of iron and glass. Goods from various parts of the world were on
display as well as a great deal of machinery. So many visitors came
by boat and train that it was possible to build colleges and museums
from the profits. After the exhibition, the Crystal Palace was
moved to South London, where it remained until it was burnt down
in 1936.
(84 words)

The Crystal palace was built for the Great Exhibition of 1851.
Made of iron and glass, it was different from other b uildings. There
were not only goods from various parts of the world on display but
there was a great deal of machinery as well. This attracted
thousands of visitors who travelled by boat and train. Later,
colleges and museums were built from the profits. The Crystal
Palace was moved to South London and it remained there until 1936
when it was burnt down.
(84 words)

祝同学学习进步~

同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《新版2019年7月N2-N1【签约班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
同学下次要把摘要写作要提交到班级作业帖，助教会批改反馈的
https://class.hujiang.com/18389454/homework

第一行which是多余的，去掉，不然整个句子没有主句。
第二行building是多余的，different from与……不同，because引导从句，后面加主语和谓语it was
第三行Various goods as well as machinery from all around the world were displayed.
注意这个语序，而且world要注意拼写
arrvied in England，加上介词
so…that应该是在同一句话的，所以that开头那句前面加句号，that小写
that it was possible to build，it is possible to do有可能做某事
exhibition前加the特指
where it remained 注意主语+谓语的语序，until引导从句，后面加主语和谓语it was
句子末尾要加上标点。


The Crystal Palace, which was built for the Great Exhibition
of 1851, was different from other buildings because it was made
of iron and glass. Goods from various parts of the world were on
display as well as a great deal of machinery. So many visitors came
by boat and train that it was possible to build colleges and museums
from the profits. After the exhibition, the Crystal Palace was
moved to South London, where it remained until it was burnt down
in 1936.
(84 words)

The Crystal palace was built for the Great Exhibition of 1851.
Made of iron and glass, it was different from other b uildings. There
were not only goods from various parts of the world on display but
there was a great deal of machinery as well. This attracted
thousands of visitors who travelled by boat and train. Later,
colleges and museums were built from the profits. The Crystal
Palace was moved to South London and it remained there until 1936
when it was burnt down.
(84 words)

祝同学学习进步~