同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《从零开始说口语1-4级【12月特惠班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好，
Good morning , professors.

it’s really my pleasure to take part in this interview today.  （it首字母大写）First, let me introduce myself. My name is zhang yawen. You can call me avin.(名字大小写注意) I come from lanzhou (地名大小写注意 Lanzhou) and I grew up with my grandparents. I was deeply influenced by my grandfather's love for Chinese calligraphy and traditional Chinese painting. When I was young, I often practiced Chinese calligraphy with my grandfather.

I graduated from lanzhou institute of technology，(大小写注意，这里应该是句号)I am a quiet and hardworking person, but I have broad interests like singing, drawing and learning traditional Chinese culture and art. （这里应该是逗号）Especially the art of the han dynasty, which was a very attractive dynasty. Therefore, my campus graduation design is also a visual design related to the traditional patterns of China's han dynasty. In addition, when I was in college, I acted as the station master of the campus radio station, （这里的可以用I am in charge of the campus radio station. master经常用来形容大师或技艺高超的人）which enriched my experience and made me more confident（也可以用built my confidence）. I finished my undergraduate studies with good scores.

The reason why I am here today is that the art Tie-dye has attracted me a lot. especially this major of lanzhou jiaotong university is the most unique among all the same majors. (注意大小写) It combined the beauty of dunhuang culture and based on Chinese han and tang dynasty culture.In the little prince's book, there is such a sentence, which means（means改为is, be similiar to sth） very similar to a poem written by wang zhihuan in the tang dynasty. It (加 is，因为like不是动词) like this: All that we need to do.Be we low or high,is to see that we grow,nearer the sky. Therefore, I am eager to further my study in this university, so as to broaden my horizon and learn more professional knowledge. If I will be lucky enough to study here, I will try my best to learn as much as possible. I believe that under the guidance of my professor, I will become a better person in this field.

Thank you again for giving me this opportunity for interview. That's all I want to say about myself. Thank you for your time.

同学在以后的写作中要注意标点和专有名词的大小写问题，在口语中这个问题会被忽视，但是落在文字上就会显现出来。不知道是否有时间限制，之前一定要掐下时间，一般来说，真正说时可能用的时间会稍长。

祝同学面试成功。

学习愉快！