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同学你好~
1.“to fully immerse your body and soul in mountains and rivers is the genuine enjoyment among our mother nature” 中 “among our mother nature” 表达不太准确，可以改为 “in nature”。
“no matter how much money you burned” 中 “burned” 不太恰当，可以改为 “spent”。
2.“Sure, human has their body and it addicts enjoying so much.” 这句话语法错误且表达不自然。可改为 “Sure, humans have their bodies and are addicted to enjoying.”。
“But if thinking about it elaborately” 可改为 “But if we think about it elaborately”，加上主语 “we” 使句子更完整。
“could cloy and strictly abide the law of it’s always insufficient” 表达比较生硬，可以调整为 “can become cloying and strictly follows the law that it is always insufficient”。
“even you have had excessive enjoyment” 可改为 “even if you have had excessive enjoyment”。
“The largest happiness of billions of wealth is not the direct material enjoyment but could only allow those stingy billionaires to enjoy them when they are counting or trigger those prodigals’ pleasure when they spent them.” 这句话比较冗长且有些拗口，可以简化为 “The greatest happiness brought by billions of wealth is not direct material enjoyment. Instead, it only allows stingy billionaires to enjoy it when counting or triggers the pleasure of prodigals when spending.”。
“All of these are beyond physiological satisfaction but they could be up to a kind of psychological satisfaction.” 可改为 “All these go beyond physiological satisfaction and can be regarded as a kind of psychological satisfaction.”。
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