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同学你好~
1.“In this context it has achieved integration of natural science and the humanity” 中 “the humanity” 可以改为 “humanities”；另外语序可以调整为 “it has achieved the integration of natural science and humanities in this context”。
“among where is the profound Chinese philosophy” 可以改为 “which contains profound Chinese philosophical thoughts”。
3.“Both of them should be promoted so as to jointly uphold and improve people’s health.” 可以改为 “Both should be promoted to jointly safeguard and enhance people's health.”，“safeguard” 比 “uphold” 在表达 “维护” 的意思上更正式一些，“enhance” 比 “improve” 在表达 “增进” 的意思上更高级一些。
希望对同学有帮助~