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“The comparatively lower performance of China’s stone-structure building”中，“building”应改为“buildings”，
“Why did it fail to overwhelm until Ming and Qing Dynasty”中，“overwhelm”可改为“prevail”；“until”使用错误，应改为“in”，“Why did it fail to prevail in Ming and Qing Dynasty”表示“为什么它在明清时期没有盛行”。同学使用until的话，结合前面的fail，双重否定表示肯定，就是到了明清它开始盛行了
“an expert in Chinese ancient building”中，“building”应改为“buildings”。
“wouldn’t be expected to a long existence”中，“to”后应接动词原形，“a long existence”是名词短语，应改为“last long”。
整体逻辑清晰，但部分表述不够自然和准确。例如“perhaps it was just because they didn’t look forward to enable it to live long”比较生硬，可以改为“perhaps it was just because they did not aim for its longevity.”
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