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同学你好~
“Building is the historic book made by stones” 中，“Building”应改为“A building”，使其成为一个泛指的单数名词。
“scarcely taken into account” 应改为“were scarcely taken into account”，与前文的时态保持一致，使用被动语态。
“leaving total different impression” 中，“total”应改为“totally”，修饰形容词“different”，用副词形式。
“in the contrary” 应改为“on the contrary”，这是固定短语，表示“相反”。
整体论述逻辑较为清晰，但部分表述不够准确和自然。例如，“Europe building heritages, which were mainly constructed by stones, show spectacular to visitors while Chinese mainly wooden building counterparts, in turn, show lackluster.” 这一句中，“show spectacular to visitors”和“show lackluster”的表达比较生硬，可以改为“Europe's stone-built building heritages are spectacularly presented to visitors, while Chinese mainly wooden buildings, in contrast, seem less impressive.” 使表达更流畅和准确。
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