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We have been calssmates for five years.
错误：calssmates
修改：classmates
正确句子：We have been classmates for five years.

he is not tall,but he looks very healthy and very energetic.
错误：逗号后缺少空格
修改：he is not tall, but he looks very healthy and always very energetic.
建议在but前后添加空格，并且为保持与原文的一致性，加入“总是”对应的英文always。

He likes music and sings songs well, plays the piano well too.
修改：He likes music, sings well, and also plays the piano well.
这样的修改使句子更流畅，并避免重复使用“well”。

He likes sports, he is good at play football, he is one of football team of school.
错误：play 应该是 playing；one of 后应该是“the”；football team 应加定冠词“the”
修改：He likes sports and is good at playing football. He is a member of the school’s football team.

Although his family is wealthy,but he always wears clothes plainly.
错误：使用although后不需要再用but
修改：Although his family is wealthy, he always dresses plainly.

His lessons are all vevy well.
错误：vevy 错别字；well 用于形容功课不合适
修改：He does very well in all his subjects.

I used to learn English and Maths badly, he helped me with patiently.
错误：helped me with patiently 的表达不自然
修改：I used to be bad at English and Maths, but he patiently helped me improve.

I get a much progress, catch up others students in class.
错误：get 应该用过去式 got；a much progress 不自然；catch up others students 缺少定冠词
修改：I made a lot of progress and caught up with the other students in class.

In these years, I have learnt lots of things from him, I will remember him forever as a good friend.
错误：In these years 不是一个常见的表达方式
修改：Over these years, I have learned a lot from him, and I will always remember him as a good friend.

祝同学学习进步~