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原文 Lijie Help Me with My English
修改 Lijie Helps Me with My English
解释： 动词 help 在第三人称单数时需要加 s。

原文 Lijie is my friend, she is good at English, but I am not.
修改 Lijie is my friend; she is good at English, but I am not.
解释： 在独立的句子之间使用分号可以使文本更连贯。

原文 I ask her for help, she said :’learning English has two ways.
修改 I asked her for help, and she said: 'Learning English has two ways.'
解释： 添加 and使两个动作更紧密连接。

原文 First, you read loudly as usual and speak often. Don’t be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, listen and write everyday.
修改First, read loudly as usual and speak often. Don’t be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, listen and write every day.
解释： 将 everyday改为 every day，表示每天的意思。

原文 I made her advice.
修改 I followed her advice.
解释： 使用 made 不合适，应该使用 followed 表示遵循建议。

原文 I can only spoke few words,
修改 I could only speak a few words,
解释： 使用 can 表示能力时，后面的动词需要用原形，或者改为过去时态。

原文 Now ,I am interested in English.
修改 Now, I am interested in English.
解释： 在逗号后应该加一个空格。

原文 We often watch English program and read English stories.
修改 We often watch English programs and read English stories.
解释： program 应该改为 programs，因为是复数形式。

原文 Thanks for help of Lijie.
修改 Thanks for the help of Lijie.
解释： for help 应该改为 for the help，表示感谢某人的帮助。

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