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My  Maths  Teacher
I entered the school , I began to like maths. （“当……时”，可以用when……这个句型，即When I entered the school）It attributed to my maths teacher, （这里应该是被动，It was attributed to） who inspired me learning maths in interesting（inspire sb to do sth，因此应该是who inspired me to learn；interesting是形容词，不能说in interesting，可以说stimulate my interest in maths） and had a great influence in my future. Her name, liufang（注意人名写法，Liu Fang，姓和名首字母都需要大写） who I will remember in my mind forever.（首先注意定语从句修饰的中心语是人名，这是一个物而不是人，所以定语从句的引导词应当是which而不是who；其次，这句话不完整，它的主干部分只有Her name，Liu Fang是同位语，后面是定语从句，所以可以这么说： I will remember her name, Liu Fang, in my mind forever.）
She is very moderate and patient. She is never mind（mind是动词，它的否定是前面加助动词，即She doesn’t mind） that we gain new knowledge slowly,but didn’t mean（缺少主语，应该是but that didn’t mean） she is not strict with us. She always let us review the knowledge we had learned（这里时态非常准确！！） in the class to make us knowledge learned solid. （应该是make our learned knowledge solid，us是人称代词，这里表示“我们的”应该是物主代词our）This is the way she inspected homeworks（homework不可数，不能加s） which she had arranged. In this case, we only work hard（“只有”可以说we can only work hard） to live up to her hope.  
She is so excellent, we can benefit more from her. It not only has knowledge, but also moderate, working hard and appreciating for beauty , these will benefit for all our life.（最后一句话可以说：We benefit a lot from her, not only in terms of…but also in terms of…，还有注意moderate是形容词，这里可以用kindness）
希望对同学有帮助~