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My name is zhangxiaoming. I am a primary student and bore in a teacher family. I am 11 years old.
注意人名书写方式，姓和名分别首字母大写：Zhang Xiaoming；
小学生 a primary school student
出生于 be born in
教师家庭a teacher's family

I hard work all my subjects. Among all my lessones, English is my favorite lesson. I dream of a English teacher myself in the future. I know It is not easy to learn English well, there is to be long way to go. However, I will be harder. Make my dream is come ture. I believe that I must be a good teacher myself.
work hard onall my subjects，动词在前，副词在后，并且缺少介词on；
lesson的复数是直接加s，即lessons。只有s、x、ch、sh结尾的才加es；
梦想成为的这个“成为”不要漏掉哦，dream of being an English teacher；English是元音开头，前面用an；
know it is，it应该是小写；
there is long way to go就可以了，to go是不定式，已经有表示将来的含义了，不需要再加to be，to be的意思是“将成为”；
I will be harder to make my dream come true. ①come true是动词，前面不需要再加is；②注意true的拼写，tr连在一起才能发/truː/的音；

I like singing and dancing, I often listen some English song in my spare time. I also like sporting and watch football match in Tv.
听歌listen to some English song；
sport是名词，不需要加ing，这里可以用sports；
watch是like 的宾语，应该是like watching；
TV两个字母都大写。
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