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Introduce Myself
大小写已经没有问题了，这很好~这里标题当中的动词Introduce应该用动名词Introducing。

I am ten years old and live the city of TaiYuan. My study is very well.
应该是live in the city，live表示“住在某地”的时候是不及物动词，后面要加介词+宾语；
well是副词，不能做表语，这里应该用形容词good。应该是My study is very good.或者副词做状语修饰动词，即 I study well.

I have a elder brother, we are twins. All every one likes us, but they always compare me with him, this make me angry. I don’t want me like my brother, I only want to be myself.
elder是元音开头，前面应当用an；
All people like us（所有人都喜欢我们） 或Every one likes us（每个人都喜欢我们）。all和every不能同时用哦~
this makes me，主语是this，是第三人称单数，谓语动词要加s；
I don't want 和 want me主语都是“我”，可以删去want后的 me；另外want后加不定式，want to do sth。即 I don't want to be like my brother/I don't want to resemble my brother.

I am a responsive boy and like sporting very much. I am good at swimming,I also like ride. By virtue to our family is far away to school, I ride bicycle to school.
性格活泼，可以用vigorous这个词。
sport本身就是名词，不需要加ing。
ride是动词，做like的宾语应当用名词，应该是like doing sth，like riding。
By virtue of+(doing) sth，而不加句子。这里可以用连词because，即because our family is far away from school，表示“离……远”，介词用from。
注意“每天”骑车上学，还需要加上every day。

I am a kind-hearted. If you need help, you tell me , I will try my best to help you, I hope we are friends.
a后面加的是名词，kind-hearted是形容词，应该是I am kind-hearted或者I am a kind-hearted boy。
I hope we will be friends. 应该是我希望“我们能成为”好朋友，we are friends是“我们已经是好朋友了”。
希望对同学有帮助~