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“ood” 应为 “mood”。
“mintue” 应为 “minute”。
“posive” 应为 “positive”。

“因为我的心理素质比较好” 可以翻译为 “Because I have a strong mentality” 或 “Because I am mentally strong”。

“有毅力一定会取得成功” 可以翻译为 “With perseverance, one will definitely achieve success”。

“After a moment ,when I learned I got a first prize, I was happy more” 应修改为 “A moment later, when I learned that I had won first prize, I was even happier”。

一些句子的表达方式可以更加自然和流畅，例如 “I also do exercise” 可以改为 “I also engage in physical activities” 或 “I also exercise regularly”。