同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《大学英语四级高效备考【2024年6月】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好

一个问题可以追问3次，如果设置成了最佳答案就不能再追问了。

raised to grow up可以简化为raised；
by my grandmother in rural可以改为by my grandmother in the countryside更贴切一些；
feeling myself no pretty可以改为feeling not pretty；
went for walk翻译为went for a walk；
looks like very smart可以改为looks really beautiful；
Before never did no one commented to me so可以改为Never before had anyone commented to me like that；
these words couraged me very much可以改为these words greatly encouraged me。

祝学习进步～