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同学你好~
第一句：科技一般翻译为science and technology哦~
这里的政治背景下的译文，人才建议可以使用human resources
前面复数，这里engine用复数哦~
同学少了全面，in all respects
第二段，基于是政治类译文，需要更正式严谨
开头建议改为We must regard science and technology as our primary productive force, human resources as our primary resources, and innovation as our primary driver of growth. We will fully implement the strategy for invigorating China through science and education, the workforce development strategy, and the innovation-driven development strategy. We will open up new areas and new arenas in development and steadily foster new growth drivers and new strengths.
第三段我们也要将中文中这种坚定翻译出来，可以将句子分为几个部分，同样的意群用we must开头引导构造we must xxx. We must xxx. We must xxxx的结构，We must prioritize the development of education, promote technological self-reliance, and drive talent development. We must accelerate the construction of an educational, technological, and talent powerhouse, and strive to cultivate talents for the Party and the country. We must comprehensively improve the quality of independent talent cultivation, focus on cultivating top-notch innovative talents, and gather talents from all over the world for use.
最后一段，同学的翻译还是随意了一些，这样的文本在普通文本中没有问题，但是对于党政公文的翻译，我们必须要严谨且文风正，通常用简短一针见血的翻译：Education is the great plan of the country and the Party. The fundamental issue of education is to cultivate who, how, and for whom. The foundation of educating people lies in moral education. We should fully implement the Party's educational policy, carry out the fundamental task of cultivating morality and cultivating people, and cultivate socialist builders and successors with comprehensive development of morality, intelligence, physical fitness, aesthetics, and labor.
建议同学可以多读一些政府译文，对于翻译这类文本有帮助哦·
希望对同学有帮助~