同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《2023年11月CATTI笔译二级【韩刚签约班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
同学第一句中more than前面要加个with表示伴随状态哦~
Rice is one of the main grain crops across the whole world, 【with】more than half of the world population, including over 60% proportion of Chinese, taking it as their staple.
【中国是世界上最早种植水稻的国家】同学翻译的【As one of the earliest countries around the world】表示的是世界上最早的国家，需要加上修饰As the earliest country in the world to cultivate rice或是这里结合后面可以直接翻译成China is the earliest country in the world to cultivate rice, with a history of about 7000 years.
享有声誉一般用enjoy来搭配哦~
关键人物一般用key figure哦~
希望对同学有帮助哦·