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同学好，

助助修改如下：
1. Since starting to learn manage money,you finally will get indepentent and free financially.
应改为：Since starting to learn to manage money, you finally will get financial independence.
learn to do sth 学习做某事，记住是 to do的形式哦！
财务自由可以直接表述翻译为： financial independence
例句：He had achieved his childhood goal of assured financial independence.    
           他实现了儿时要经济独立的目标。

2. If you can't hard make money 应改为：If you can't  try/work hard to make money.
hard作为副词时，通常是： try hard 、work hard、study hard等等
所以此处应改为：努力工作去赚钱，或者努力尝试去赚钱。

3. The world forever can't stop to wait,besides you can keep improving yourself. 这句话翻译出来有点偏差哦~ can't stop to wait后面是wait谁呢，没有讲明。 besides是除此之外的意思，没有除非的意思。除非是翻译为： unless
例句：Unless something unexpected happens, I'll see you tomorrow.
          除非有任何意外，不然我明天会去看你。
故整句话应改为：The world will never（永远不） stop waiting for you, unless you keep improving yourself.

4.  I must have a lunch sleep after every my lunch. 应改为： I must have a nap after lunch every time.
（1）every time 每次
例句；Every time she travels on the bus it's delayed by at least three hours
         每次她乘公车出行都至少耽搁3个小时。
（2）have/take a nap 睡午觉（小憩一下）
On my spare time, I could have a nap every noon.

5. 问题回答：
the best way to 的意思是：… 最好的方法
所以当然后面要跟东西了，不然怎么会知道是什么的最好的方法呢。
例句：Flying is quite the best way to travel.  航空绝对是最佳旅行方式。
           What's the best way to lose weight? 什么是最好的减肥方法?

希望以上能帮助到同学，祝同学在沪江学习愉快！