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1. these days语法问题，修改为in these days，
2. chatter 是指“唠叨，喋喋不休”， 换成controversy
3. which provided a convenient way  陈述事实，现在时provides
4.  live in the modern city后置定语living，同时modern cities。
5.  should be taken in restricting 应该是should be taken to restrict
5. all through删掉，用法错误，后面要接名词的。
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5. but also are some people put no curb on their behaviors.要么是but also there are some people putting no curb on their behaviors,要么是but also some people put no curb on their behaviors
6. 自然资源保护 natural resources conservation
7. markup the price of per bag to improving这里improve要用动词原形
8. ，only we pay attention to environment pollution， only后要加when
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