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1.be funded by 由……资助，这个和同学第一段提出的nationalized国有化还是有区别的。题目表达的意思是，国家来出这部分交通费，民众则免费，国有的话不一定的。而且就中国而言，公共交通系统本身就是国有哦，没有私人的。公交，铁路，航空目前都是国有。【立意方面同学再来斟酌下，下面重点是语法】

2.In this premise,two situations which totally inverse will be analyzed about the new conception in the following paragraphs.【分析出两种不同的状况，可以用被动态，analyze into几乎没有见过这个短语呢】

3.Firstly, if all  management of public transportation had already been controlled by government that citizens would have to pay tax with no doubt. 【这里right换成management更恰当，并不是一种权利，确切说是管理】

4.Every employee from transportation system would  worry about the incomethat free tickets can not produce any profits. 【应该是担心收入受到影响，不要用中式思维直接翻译“收入问题”其实就是收入】

5.Under the pressure from complaints and financial burden, government have to consider that raises tax to reduce subsidy  before long.【句尾加no longer?no longer是不再...的意思，同学是想表达不久之后吧】

6.For producing more profits, companies can choose suitable time  to promote service and renew facilities ...【suitable time就可以的，time名词】

7. Instead of anytime, passengers need to choose high-speed train or airplane to travel in a proper season.【这句话和后面的一句话内容不一致呢？大家只能选择合适的时间，那就是大家的选择相对有限，基本是集中出行，那不是容易交通堵塞吗？】

8.As for free, it is not helpful  to them.【to对于...来说】
以上，祝同学学习愉快~