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网校学员vcz**在学习Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时时提出了此问题,已有10人帮助了TA。

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同学你好,该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程,想要更系统的学习,欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习,而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

不客气哦同学,继续加油吧!同学作文写得越来越好啦,这次的文章条理很清楚,观点明确层次清晰,这点在英文写作很重要哦。

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复活节兔耳朵

同学你好,该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程,想要更系统的学习,欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习,而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好,requestion 是重新提问的意思,提供日常所需可以用requirement。convenient要用名词词性convenience。
behalf是名词,这里要用幸动词,可以改成is the symbol of或者直接用is。at the same没有这个说法,可以用coequally同等地、平等地。最后一句建议改成else the shopping center should be at the higher rank.

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复活节兔耳朵

同学你好,该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程,想要更系统的学习,欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习,而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

第三段,前面给出了比较明确的转折,讲述观点,很好。
这句句子结构比较乱 Because of modern life pace is so quick and restrict that we need more relax and to get rid of stress with any possibilities.
because of 后加名词,不能加一个句子。可以去掉of。
后面restrict与quick并列(and前后的两个词)要用形容词restricted。
relax应该用名词词性relaxation。
放松和用一切机会摆脱压力不是并列关系,建议不要用and,可以另起一句话。……more relaxation.In a word,they need get rid of stress with any possibilities.

 That the life elements attract us to stay here , keeping a positive mood as well. 开头that the建议改成these

网校助教

复活节兔耳朵

同学你好,该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程,想要更系统的学习,欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习,而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好,第二段开头抛出观点非常清楚。
这句话时态和语态不正确,If the new town were constructed now, inhabitants would buy a lot of living goods for daily life at the first time. 建议改成比较简洁的句子:During the construction of the town, inhabitants need a lot of living goods for daily life at the first time.

网校助教

复活节兔耳朵

同学你好,该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程,想要更系统的学习,欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习,而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好,第一段完成得不错哦,条理清晰,句子正确。不过最后一句最后部分,the entertainment function is similar 不太明白是想说什么意思。可以删掉这部分噢,或者说得更清楚些,谁的娱乐功能和谁相似。第一段已经表达很完整了,放在后面讲这句也可以哦。

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vcz**

要下班,后面一点没写好…😓

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vcz**

In my opinion, a shopping center provides us a basic requestion for everyday needs. Town masses get the security and convenient from it. Gym and park behalf the hope and favour that nothing can replace. So, if the government has enough  funding, all the facilities should be constructed at the same, else the shopping center has to put the higher rank.第四段

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vcz**

On the other hand, people may own a typical day with a shopping center easily, but they can not have fun in the rest time. Because of modern life pace is so quick and restrict that we need more relax and to get rid of stress with any possibilities.  While, parks mean green and  sports center means health.  That the life elements attract us to stay here , keeping a positive mood as well.第三段

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vcz**

Shopping center should be established prior to public parks. The reason is quite simple. If the new town were constructed now, inhabitants would buy a lot of living goods for daily life at the first time. Then the regional economic system could be run and developed by sales logistics and produce. It is like nutrition which can help fruit grow up gradually.第二段

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vcz**

How to design a new town is becoming a popular problem among  the residents who will live in this place.  Some of them prefer public parks or sports facilities, others like shopping center much more then. I think these two kind of constructions are both indispensable in a town and the entertainment function is similar.第一段

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