同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好～

1. Strange apperance and fancy design are both advertisements. 这里面同学是想说“appearance”吗？～ 另外同学可以参考这样表达是否更清楚：What advertisements show are all strange appearance and fancy design.
2. , first-tier and second tier cities already haven't enough spaces to accommodate ... 这里面haven't同学是想表达时态吗？“没有”我们用的是don't have；这里面助助建议用there be 句型～
例如：I don't have maths and I don't have maths homework.-那天没有数学课，不用做数学作业。
3. Developers have to turn the eyesight to others which own cheaper land price and have loose policy.  同学想表达什么呢？～是否想说：..... and the city without strict estate policy.
4. Then, A part of ... --> 注意大小写
5. we cannot ignore some cheatings could be happened.. --> cheating后面不用加s～另外大作文中尽量不要省略连接词为好，that could happen，happen没有被动语态
例如：We are also aware of some cheating on the celeb vote, and we will disqualify entries if it continues.  
我们也在考虑是否有投票作弊的可能性，若这种情况继续下去，我们会对恶意投票方作出相关的处理。
Anything could happen on him at that moment.  
在那时任何事都可能发生在他身上。

祝同学学习愉快～