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Four years after 表述不完整，“四年过去了” 的正确表达为  Four years later。
the issue involution 语序与冠词错误，应改为 the issue of involution：加介词 of 明确从属关系，“内卷” 作为特定术语需加引号；同时补充 has become 比 has been 更强调 “从无到有成为焦点” 的动态过程。
the standing deputy director of office of Central Financial and Economic committee 专有名词与冠词错误：
机构名称需大写且加定冠词，改为 Executive Deputy Director of the General Office of the Central Financial and Economic Affairs Commission；
“常务副主任” 官方译法为 Executive Deputy Director，而非 standing deputy director；
“中央财经委员会” 固定译法是 Central Financial and Economic Affairs Commission，需补充 Affairs 且加定冠词 the。
point out this on his article delivered by People’s Daily ：
时态错误，“去年 12 月” 为过去时，point 改为 pointed out；
介词错误，“在报刊撰文” 用 in his article published in People’s Daily，on 改为 in，delivered by 改为 published in 更贴合 “刊发” 的语境。
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