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New industries and business sprung up as well as smart manufacture and related products updated instantly.” 这句话存在语法错误。“sprung” 是 “spring” 的过去式，在这个句子中，“as well as” 连接的前后两部分结构不一致，前半部分用了动词短语，后半部分 “updated instantly” 结构较混乱。可改为 “New industries and new business models emerged, and smart manufacturing and related products were updated rapidly.”
“Our green productive gained great pace with sectors such as windpower, photovoltage and new electronic vehicle ahead of the world.” 这里 “productive” 是形容词，不能作主语，应改为 “productivity”。“new electronic vehicle” 应使用复数形式 “new energy vehicles”。修改后的句子为 “Our green productivity gained great momentum with sectors such as wind power, photovoltaic and new energy vehicles leading the world.”
“During Spring Festival holiday, the demand showed a exuberant outlook in various market as home appliance, audio and video apparatus showed hot selling, a 166.4% increase year on year, as well as tourism sector gained 37.5 percent improvement.” “a exuberant” 中不定冠词使用错误，应是 “an exuberant” 。“market” 应使用复数形式 “markets”。“showed hot selling” 表达不地道，可改为 “saw booming sales” 。“as well as tourism sector gained” 表述较生硬，可改为 “and the tourism sector saw a 37.5 percent increase” 。
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