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第一段：“Chinese government highly values agriculture and always remains committed to realize general grain self-supply by domestic output.” 中，“Chinese government” 前应加定冠词 “The”，表示特指中国政府；“remains committed to” 中 “to” 是介词，后面应接动名词形式，所以 “realize” 要改为 “realizing”；“general grain self-supply” 表达较生硬，“粮食基本自给” 常见表达为 “basic self-sufficiency in grain”；“by domestic output” 表达不太准确，“立足国内” 常用 “based on domestic resources” 或 “relying on domestic sources” 。
“The fact itself that China could feed nearly 20% world population with its croplands and water resource lower than average global standard embodies a kind of intensive model.” 中，“water resource” 应该用复数形式 “water resources”；“embody a kind of intensive model” 表达较生硬，“体现了一种集约” 可改为 “reflects a form of intensiveness”。
第二段：“While we are not satisfied by this score” 中，“satisfied by” 使用错误，“对…… 满意” 常用 “be satisfied with”；
“we are ready to further facilitate high effectively intensive agricultural development.” 中，“high effectively” 表达错误，“高效” 应该用形容词 “highly efficient” 来修饰 “intensive agricultural development”。
“well implement projects such as returning croplands to forest, protecting natural forest, protecting and curbing desert, conserving water and soil and managing grassland.” 中，“returning croplands to forest” 和 “protecting natural forest” 中 “forest” 一般用复数形式 “forests” 更合适；“protecting and curbing desert” 表达有误，“防沙治沙” 常用 “preventing and controlling desertification”。
“Actually, conserving China’s ecological environment means to care and protect our mother earth as well.” 中，“means to care” 表达错误，“mean” 表示 “意味着” 时，后接动名词，应改为 “means caring and protecting xxx”。
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