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“the multilateral cooperation will be needed to limit carbon emission so as to alleviate climate change and the investment should be simultaneously enlarged to step up green transformation.” 这句话中，“limit carbon emission” 应改为 “limit carbon emissions”，emission 常用复数形式表示 “排放物，排放量”；“enlarged” 用词不当，“加大投资” 常用 “increase investment”；
“The war between Russia and Ukraine, together with soaring energy price, have brought heavy pressure to all governments” 中，主语是 “The war between Russia and Ukraine, together with soaring energy price”，根据主谓一致原则，“together with” 连接的成分不影响主语的单复数，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式 “has”，而不是 “have”；“brought heavy pressure to all governments” 中 “to” 使用错误，应该是 “on”，即 “bring pressure on...”。
“leading to fossil fuels such as coal have been adopted as a makeshift.” 中，“leading to” 后不能接句子，“to” 是介词，应接名词、动名词等，这里可改为 “leading to the adoption of fossil fuels such as coal as a makeshift” 或 “resulting in fossil fuels such as coal being adopted as a makeshift”。
“It’s a pressing need for all parties to accelerate implementing reliable climate policies in all respects to improve energy supply.” 中，“improve energy supply” 表达不准确，根据原文是 “增加绿色能源供应”，应改为 “increase the supply of green energy”；“accelerate implementing” 用法错误，“accelerate” 后接名词或动名词，可改为 “accelerate the implementation of”。
“Also, the current energy crisis manifests that an independent policy featuring clean and green would meet a country’s safety purpose.” 中，“clean and green” 作为形容词短语修饰名词时，通常放在名词前，即 “a clean and green independent policy”；
“Since this April, the prospect of global economy showed a distinctly gloomy trend, indicating it will possibly face a recession soon, only two years later than last time.” 中，“Since this April” 表示从今年四月以来，句子时态应该用现在完成时，“showed” 应改为 “has shown”；“only two years later than last time” 表达不清楚，可改为 “only two years after the last one”。
“Facing to the large challenges and conflicts, boosting our collaboration still serves as the best approach for us to better economic prospect and reduce the risk of geopolitical economy schism.” 中，“Facing to” 错误，“face” 作为及物动词，直接接宾语，应去掉 “to”。
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