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“Both of the two sides, China and Africa” 表述冗余，直接说 “China and Africa” 即可；“signed the implemented plans” “implemented” 应改为 “implementation”。
“By concerted holding” 表达有误，“concerted” 是形容词，不能修饰动词 “holding”，应改为 “By jointly holding”；“the two parties” 在这个语境中使用不太恰当，用 “both sides” 更自然；“communication” 和 “cooperation” 通常用复数形式更合适。
“346 implemented plans of bilateral governmental cultural agreement have been signed and put in place” 中 “agreement” 应使用复数形式 “agreements”；
“140 artist groups have been organized and dispatched from China to Africa to give their perform there” 中 “perform” 是动词，此处应使用名词 “performances”；“give their perform” 表达也不准确，直接 “give performances” 就可以。
“artist groups form 28 countries of Africa” 中 “form” 拼写错误，应为 “from”；“show China” 表意不明，应该是 “来中国演出”，改为 “perform in China”。
“China arranged about one hundred cultural research classes” 时态错误，根据 “Since 2016”，应该用现在完成时；“almost 1500 African participants joining this move” 结构错误，应该用独立主格结构或者其他合适的表达方式来清晰地表达参与这件事，这里用 “with” 结构更合适。
修改后：Since 2016, China has arranged about one hundred cultural training courses ( “研修班” 用 “training courses” 更合适 ) for African countries, with nearly 1500 African participants.
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