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同学你好~
“a new round revolution in science and technology and a new industry transform are souring” 中 “souring” 应改为 “surging”；“transform” 应改为 “transformation”。
“profoundly change surging in scientific research” 表述不恰当且有语法错误，可改为 “profound changes are taking place in scientific research paradigms”。
“the process that science and technology infiltrated and integrated with economic and social development is accelerating” 比较冗长且不够准确，可改为 “the infiltration and integration of science and technology into economic and social development is accelerating”。
“These urgently entail us to reinforce fundamental research so that unravel the critical problems from origin and the root.” 中 “unravel” 用词不准确，可改为 “solve”；“from origin and the root” 比较中式英语，可改为 “at the source and at the fundamental level”。
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