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网校学员w王李**在学习突破英语高频3500词【随到随学班】时提出了此问题,已有1人帮助了TA。

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同学你好,该知识点来自沪江网校《突破英语高频3500词【随到随学班】》的课程,想要更系统的学习,欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习,而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好:
请参考——
Twenty-third June 改为 Jun. 23rd,或者23rd Jun. 【日期的表达方式】
sunshine  改为Sunny 【描述天气情况用形容词,sunny,cloudy 等】
above thirty degree 改为如31 degrees 【写具体的度数即可】

I received a message from the delivery company, informing me to collect my package. This afternoon, I received another message again. I went to the delivery station when I came back from work. The woman who is the owner asked me, “What are the last four digits of your cell phone number?” “2112,  ”I answered. “Do I have two packages? The woman looked over her phone and said,” It is not two. After a while, she took out one ,two,three ……until the fifth. Oh,dear! Why five? Were they all mine? I was a little surprised. I didn’t
buy these things. I mumbled something about the packages which were shown to
me. “Does your phone number end with 2112?” “Yes,” I answered. “It Is just right,” the woman said. “Oh! They may be from my daughter!” I added.  “Have a daughter! You are a happy mother!” the woman said. I smiled at her.
When I came out with a bunch of boxes in my arm, I was pleased. I knew that it’s my daughter’s  love. How couldn‘t I know that? At the end of March, the epidemic in Shanghai was so serious that people over the country were paying attention. I worried about my daughter, but she always played It down 【下划线表意不明】and said, ‘Don‘t worry about me. I am very well and I am often busy. Don‘t disturb me.’’ She always exists quietly【下划线部分,英语通常不这样表达】, and never add any trouble to me. There are so many kinds of love in the world. How can‘t your love I know? 【下划线部分表意不明】

建议同学写句子的时候多梳理句子结构,主谓要明确,基本结构要完整。在这样的基础上,选择恰当的句式和时态。同时留意书写格式。

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