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网校学员Dai**在学习新概念英语第二册【超值现金奖励班】时提出了此问题,已有1人帮助了TA。

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助助的修改如下:

Yesterday was a bad day. It's like all bad luck came to me and everything went wrong.

The day before yesterday, I got a job interview after looking for a new job for a long time. I needed to arrive 【此处要加上at,这里arrive是不及物东西】the company at 10 a.m., and the company is 2 hours away from my home, so I set the alarm clock at 6 o'clock the day before yesterday. Everything seemed normal.

But the alarm clock didn't ring yesterday. When I got up, it was 7 o'clock. The job interview was set at 10 a.m. so I needed to be ready at 8 o'clock. You may wonder it seems not that bad. That's what I thought first. The alarm clock didn't ring was not the only abnormal thing yesterday.

I didn't notice the message from HR from the APP, which says Please bring your CV. I thought there was no need to bring it so I didn't print it earlier. Just as I tried to print it at home, I found my printer couldn't work. That meant I needed to spend time to find a printer shop to print my CV. Finally【此处最好加上逗号,】 I found one, but the expensive printing price shocked me. I just printed 10 pages, it cost me 10 yuan!

Another strange thing was that, on the way, there was also something wrong with my cloth. My bad belt rubbed with my cloth【这个词指的是:织物、布料,同学在这里想写的是clothes吗?】 so that those areas slagged. As it was not that serious, I left it behind.

I arrived at the company just at 10 a.m. The interview wasn't that bad, however, I failed. Because I wasn't capable enough. I couldn't prove I was a suitable candidate. Whatever, I was accustomed to this kind of thing.

After that I went to a shopping mall nearby. I ate something in the shopping mall. Then I took subway to go home. I was surprised to find there were new covid-19 cases in the district at which the company and the shopping mall were located. I was afraid of getting infected as I ate something in the shopping mall. I felt scared.

What a terribe【注意terrible的拼写】 day! What I have learnt from the bad day experience is that I should be prepared well【此处well可以去掉】 for everything in advance, like I should check everything to ensure they are in good condition. Or else, bad things may happen one by one again.

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