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1. 29 percent population, over 30 percent total GDP 掉了of, 修改为29 percent of the population, over 30 percent of the total GDP
2.“东盟十国”这里的十不需要翻译出来
3. as well as 后面的内容重要性比前面的要小，“逐步降低贸易关税，减少贸易和技术壁垒等”用and连接更恰当。
4. global economy 前面要加定冠词，has been suffered from应该是has suffered from 不需要用被动。
5.  Asia countries应该是Asian countries
6. between working together or fight for themselves.这里用fighting
7. “东亚国家的抗疫体现了合作的重要性，”“体现”的主语是东亚国家的抗疫，That east Asian countries, unlike European and American countries with more advanced technology and more capital, fighting against the pandemic语法错误。
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