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in the China's car market 可以改成in the automobile market of China
there was a surge of domestic brand while soared from 25 percent in 2008 to 46 percent in 2009
while改成which，引导定语从句，另外根据图表2009年并没有到46%这么高。

While the number of Japan's car brand was falling from 35 percent to 26 percent and a US brand noting changed in same span.
While可以改成In contrast，相反
number可以改成proportion，这是一个比例
日本汽车品牌 Japanese car brands
a US brand noting changed in same span 改成 there was no change in American brands over the same period

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