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Nowadays, more 【ascalating 拼写有误】 English learning insititutions, like a thief 【wothout，是想写without吧】 warning, run abruptly into our daliy life.

It is the proceedings that alter the way we study, ...
Nearly 70 percent of 2,003 respondants said ' yes' in accordance with a survey on the subject: Do you think children should take English at an early age?
留意大小写格式；percent 不加s；survey 是辅音音标开头的，前面用a；should 留意拼写；should 是情态动词，后跟动词原形；后面age 前面需要加上不定冠词。

Only few parents can let their kids go in their own ways.
这里only 修饰主语，不需要倒装；原句句意不明确，参考补全。
I assume one reason for the trend is parents’ fixation on giving children an early advantage.
“父母的”用parents‘ 表示。
... it is easier for kids to develop language skills.
留意easier的拼写；原句过于中式化，建议改一下。
Though children may feel oppressed at the mention of going to learn English, their parents do make them do it.
while 和but 都是连词，不可以出现在一个句子里；结合语境，这里可以用though “尽管”引导让步状语从句；留意谓语补全；大小写格式；适当使用代词，使句子简洁。
So children always fritter away on playing video games or online chatting.
通常不说telephoen games。
The cost of institutions which caters for the needs of learning also varies.
which 指代cost，相当于三单，cater 用三单形式。
Stingy can buy an online course for just as little as 2000 to 4000 yuan.
调整一下语序。
The well-heeled may opt for alien teachers’ form which claims to improve the students’ oral English excessively and cost 20,000 or 10,000 yuan. In between you can get both oral and basic grammar knowledge.
根据句意，“外教的形式”需要加上所有格；which 引导的定语从句修饰form，留意claim 的用法【claim to do】，句意补全；cost 后面直接跟费用；留意数字的正确书写格式；最后一个form 不太符合句意，可以参考改为knowledge或是skills。

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