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助助为同学的作文批改如下：
1.Individuals taking course at private may feel little wonder about training school --how it work, what is difference between private and training.
【work谓语单复数错误，前面是It，应该使用第三人称单数形式works】
【is difference之间缺少定冠词，名词单复数错误。不同点肯定不止一个，改为are the differences】
2.Whell, to dispel these you have only to attend private school and training school despite now you are not lack of school to.
【Whell疑似拼写错误，改为Well】【school后面的to为多余词语，删掉】
【despite now you are not lack of...建议改为despite of no lack of...】
3.if you do it, you will see the different side of those.【句首首字母大写】
4.the fomer is to develop conprehensive student instilled good attitude towards life while the later is to develop their professional skill or technique that would benefit him in later life.
【句首首字母大写】【fomer拼写错误，应改为former】【conprehensive拼写错误，应改为comprehensive】
【later疑似拼写错误，表示后者应该使用latter】【professional skill中的skill应使用复数形式skills】
5.Paradoxcally, the two have two-side weapon stamp.
【Paradoxcally疑为拼写错误，改为Paradoxically】【stamp建议改为复数stamps】
6. when you at prevate school, your ability to make a inviting converaation with strangers is circumscribed your view of the world restricted and you will get banal streak on outside world, for shortage of flying nest experences, but in some respect, prevate school can offer you more knowledge than ever students in training school.
【converaation拼写错误，应改为conversation】【prevate school拼写错误，缺少冠词，应改为a private school】
【句首字母大写】【exprences疑似拼写错误】

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