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Actually, the catastrophe started about four months ago.
“段时间+ago” 表示“... 以前”，用在一般过去时里作时间状语。
But what's worse, the area of ground surface that has been destroyed this time is twice as large as that was last year.
this time 的顺序调换一下更好；用that 指代同名异物的比较对象；was 与last year 一致。
I'm very shocked to hear that because it means 【there are】 thousands of buildings and fields changed into ashes.
there are 是多余的，删去。changed 是谓语，和are 之间的逻辑不通。
A farmer with his cows, the number of which is over one thousand, didn't know where to go.
如果前面用took，和后面的didn't know 逻辑冲突；定语从句的引导部分改一下，whose amont 不准确。
The fire destroyed everything he saw,including buildings,money,forests,and lives, too.
also 用在实义动词前面，非实义动词后面。
The air is full of dust and the sky has turned red because of the flame.
flame 可以表示“火光”，一般不说fire light。
No one knows how long it will last.
宾语从句用陈述语序。

这两个句子助助做了修改。请参考～

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