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At that time of the morning, my friends were smash-and-grab a  jewellery shop where near Piccadilly street.  
smash-and-grab是形容词，在这里改成动词，可以直接说were robbing
where改成which was，否则从句没有主语和谓语

Iwas hurry that we were arrested when I drove the car in the arcade.  
这句话是要表达什么意思呢~

So inspite of that the arcade have almost no one,I was open the headlight and horn blaring.
这句话也可以再说一下要表达的意思

When we arrived the jewellery shop,I stopped the car outside the shop and stayed at the wheel .  
arrvied后面要加介词at

My friends with ablack stockings over their faces jumped out and smashed the window.
a是多余的，去掉

At that time ,I see a old man and two woman throwing furniture to my friends, meanwhile,Tom was raid rings and Mike was raid diamonds , a status was struck to theirs  back.
see改成saw，过去式。第二个逗号改成句号，逗号不能连接句子
raid改成raiding
and they were struck in the back by a statue注意加上and连接句子，in the back在后背上，statue注意拼写
Three minutes later ,they were out of the shops and scrambled back into the car to escaped.
escape，to后面用动词原形，构成不定式

Although Tom and Mike 's back were hurt，we never thought the road would be so easy.
backs复数
road改成raid

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