同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《新概念英语第四册【天猫专享】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

have a face looked like ours 用过去分词作定语，表示这个过去分词和前面其所修饰的名词必须是被动关系，look和face是被动关系吗？你会说Your face is looked like mine 吗？（脸被长得像？）我们只会说You face looks like mine. 从词性上讲，Look是不及物动词，所以看某人都说look at sth., 都是要加介词的，所以也不可能存在look face这种说法。所以这句话，要么用定语从句，Neanderthal man has faces that look like ours， 或者直接说Neanderthal man and us look alike.
look alike 的主语是俩个事物或人，不接宾语。意思是他们看起来相似。eg, A and B look alike.
look like 也是俩事物或人指看起来像。不过句子结构是A looks like B.

for 属于并列连词，由它引导的分句表示补充说明性的理由，通常只能置于句末，且必须用逗号与前面的分句隔开。for的语气是非常弱的，你这句话如果一定要用for，前面记得加逗号，语法上不能算错，但是就这句话的语意来说，你是想要强调这个原因的，because 语气最强，表示直接原因，我们不应该过度捕杀动物因为很多动物已经面临灭绝，我认为用because更合适。

have been regarded as extinct creatures 这里如果你想表达【过去一度被认为，现在已经不这么认为了】是的可以用had been regarded...这里是我对你想表达的意思理解不到位。

同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《新概念英语第四册【天猫专享】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好～

下次想要提交作文可以到作业区哦～

作文要注意下面这些错误：（黑体字是改过的内容）

Nowadays, we can hardly resist the fascination of natural history museums where the skeletons and fossils of extinct forms of creatures are on display.
hardly通常放在实义动词之前，与can连用，表示【不大可能】。

If one enters a museum, one can see all sorts of things: remains of animals that only existed in prehistorical times.
主语是one后面的谓语动词不要忘记用单三形式；all sorts of...是正确的搭配，表示【各种各样的】。

There are fossilized crustaceans that look like a stone.
当连接词that在定语从句中做主语时，不能省略。既然是介绍博物馆的展品，我建议都用一般现在时，虽然都是化石，都是过去的事物，但是在你介绍的时候，这些东西就是现在存在的展品，可以用一般现在时。

There are also mammals and perhaps they are the most fascinating creatures called Neanderthal man who lived near our times and has faces that look like ours.
这句话注意单复数，主语和动词的形态要保持数的统一；另外注意：当man作为人类讲的时候，看作一个整体，是单数。

There are dodo which could have been saved from extinction if the Europeans had not hunted them as a sort of food in 17th.
这句话时态比较混乱，dodo已经灭绝了，完全是过去时，怎么能用现在完成时来表示延续到现在的事情呢？这里可以用虚拟语气， 【If ＋主语＋had＋过去分词，主语＋ should（could, would, 或might）＋ have ＋过去分词】，表示条件从句与过去事实不符。

It also reminds us that we shouldn’t excessively hunt animals because many forms of animal life are in danger of becoming extinct today.
注意单复数。

If the died animal can’t fascinate you, there are also living fossils that have already been living at the earth tens of millions of years ago and even hundreds of millions of years ago （重复删掉）， such as[/b] the coelacanths which lived with dinosaurs and had been regarded as extinct creatures but were found by fishermen.
there be句型中关系词在定语从句中做主语时，只能用that不能用which；such as后面不能加冒号，不是中文，直接列出来有什么就行了；还要注意单复数，要统一。

The platypus (删掉which）also have been living for a long time and still live in Australia.

继续加油哦～