同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《英语零基础直达大学六级【全额奖学金班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
were woken，过去分词和be动词构成被动语态
13 times 复数，表示次数
made him sared 改成shocked him震惊了他
what had happened 过去完成时表示动作发生在decided之前
bravely ran to the church，用副词+动词的形式
had tried to repair the clock but failed 试图要修但是失败了
it's 改成it was，过去时
was still happy 加上谓语
for what the grocer did，what引导从句，作did的宾语
striking once per hour 每小时敲响一次，不知道同学是不是这个意思。
and he gave the grocer a cup of  tea，加上主语

祝同学学习进步~