同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk流利生活口语1v6精品超小班【150次卡】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学上午好，很高兴为你解答。
1 I felt that my spoken English is more than before
我的口语比之前好了很多。
better than或是 much better than。
2 Although there are still some small places I don't understand
中文说还有几处不明白的地方，但是英文表达中不用places。直接用there are still something I don't understand
3 The foreign teacher always say hello to us separately every time in class and she is very nice.
主语是第三人称单数，所以say用says。
4 introduce them with appropriate possessive adjective
形容词使用复数，即adjectives
5 homer is Mona's son and Mona is homer's mother
荷马是人名，要大写。Homer
6 there were kilogram and gram and pound.
列举时，出现多个词，只需在倒数第二个和最后一个之间加and，其他之间用逗号连接。
7 I have learned according to average weight to judge whether a person is thin or heavy.
改为I have learned how to judge whether a person is thin or heavy according to average weight
8 I have learned about how to fill the emergency contacts，and give other people my personal information and emergency contact.
去掉give前的and，原因同6.
9 .looking forward to next class！
句子开头要大写。
Looking。

祝天天向上~