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同学你好哦~
1.This was my second lesson，it was very interesting  but a little difficult for me，because I was a little poor in numbers.【这里可以用but表达一个语气的转折】

2.第二段可以多分几句来描写哈。一个句子太长。
...and  express the reason why I like the weather and didn't like,for example，I like spring ，because it is warm and sunny...【the reason why... 做...的原因】

3.there放在句中不要大写首字母哈
Second，I have learned the signs for weather forecast，for example，overcast and sunny ,cloudy ,light rain,shower ,thunder shower and moderate rain ....【There were a lot of signs，这个可以不用，和前面语义有重复。另外一个句子里面不要超过三个and，可以直接用逗号】

4.第四段注意句中单词大小写问题

5.   Fourth,I have learned how to talk about festivals，New Year's Day and Spring Festival is my favorite festival,because I can together with my family and had dumplings.【节日首字母要大写哈】

6.bye前面是逗号，首字母不大写
祝同学学习愉快~