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同学晚上好。
看到同学这么努力，助助决定为了你加个班，今晚就改好~
感动不感动(#^.^#)

1 our lives whith makes us easier to receive new information
which拼写错误。
2 some repoters tend to write a shocked headline to draw people's eyes.
reporters拼写错误。
“吸引眼球的标题”，用来修饰headline，用ing的形容词，即shocking。
3 And if not really looking through the article
把looking改为reading，阅读文章。
4 ,many advertisements are not ture and those poducts don't really useful as stores saying.
true拼写错误。
把don't改为aren't。
（这里是stores专柜商场还是stories广告故事呢？）
saying改为say。
5 Generally speaking,we need to distinguish the imformation online,in case we suffer the harm from misleading information online
前后都提到了online，比较啰嗦，逻辑上保留一个即可，去掉最后一个。
6 Only can we do it,the environment of the Internet will be better.
only引导倒装句使用错误。
应该是，
Only we do it, will the environment of the Internet be better.

祝天天向上~