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同学这篇提供的中文不完整哟

这段翻译中有几处语法和表达上的错误：

We also called some friends, about eleven people.
修改建议：句子结构稍显累赘，可以简化表达。
改为：We also called about eleven friends.

We were divided two teams.
修改建议：缺少介词“into”。
改为：We were divided into two teams.

five people a team.
修改建议：作为句子开始，首字母应大写；此外，为了清晰性，可以稍作重组。
改为：Each team had five people.

A person left was a judge.
修改建议：语序不自然，需要重组。
改为：The remaining person was a judge.

We all grabbed up the part of rope, the judge cried loudly:’start!’
修改建议：去掉“up”和在“rope,”后加“and”以改善流畅度。
改为：We all grabbed the part of the rope, and the judge cried loudly, Start!

Because the grass was very wet and so much mud, it was difficult that we stood on it.
修改建议：结构和语法需要改进。
改为：Because the grass was very wet and muddy, it was difficult for us to stand on it.

Suddenly, the rope broke up at the middle.
修改建议：“broke up”通常用于人际关系结束，此处应用“broke”。
改为：Suddenly, the rope broke in the middle.

At that time, the judge said: 'who win the game?
修改建议：“who win”应使用过去时和大写开始。
改为：At that time, the judge said: Who won the game?

My friend said: 'everyone lost the game, for we all fall down.'
修改建议：句子需要使用过去时态，且“fall down”应改为过去时。
改为：My friend said, Everyone lost the game, for we all fell down.

Our parents were angry to look at us,but we had a lot of fun.
修改建议：介词使用不当，应为“angry with us”。
改为：Our parents were angry with us, but we had a lot of fun.