写作是运用语言文字符号反映客观事实，表达思想感情整体知识信息的创造性脑力劳动过程，作为一个完整的系统过程，写作活动大致可以分为，采集，构思，表述三个阶段，而在英语作文考试中，写作也应该做到以上说的，很多考生在英语听力考试的过程中一直得不到提高，沪江的小编认为，英语四级写作得不到提高，其实是因为没有掌握到写作的方法和技巧，也没有做到更好的训练，而今天沪江的小编为大家整理了一些英语四级考试写作重点，希望能够给大家带来帮助

　　Part I Writing (30 minutes)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Air Pollution following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　1. 近年来空气污染严重

　　2. 空气污染引发的危害

　　3. 有什么解决办法

　　参考范文：

　　Air Pollution

　　It is reported that thick fog and haze surround many parts of China. People have to wear masks when they go out. As air pollution is getting increasingly worse, it has become the main concern of people.

　　Air pollution can have serious consequences for human’s health and also severely affects natural ecosystems. Millions of people die of illnesses related to air pollution every year. Due to particles from exhaust emissions, green house effects result in warmer weather, acid rains corrode the earth, and frequent haze causes traffic problems.

　　Confronted with such situation, positive measures should be adopted. The government should keep its regulatory role for properly supervision. Related rules should be made out for reducing emissions of new vehicles and limiting high-emission vehicles. Factories should meet standards for curbing emissions of pollutants in surrounding cities. Meanwhile, provinces and municipalities in each target region should set up a mechanism for the joint prevention and control of air pollution.

　　【点评】

　　文中从雾霾和人们带口罩出门引出空气污染这一话题，然后在第二段中谈及空气污染对人类健康和自然生态系统的影响，在最后一段中分别指出政府，工厂及省、市等需要采取措施解决空气污染的问题。

　　第一段中thick fog and haze意为“雾霾”，getting increasingly worse意为“日益恶化”;第二段中severely affects natural ecosystems意为“严重影响自然生态系统”，exhaust emissions意为“废弃排放”，green house effects意为“温室效应”，corrode意为“腐蚀”;第三段中keep its regulatory role意为“发挥其监管的职责”;curbing emissions of pollutants意为“减少污染物的排放”。

　　part B

　　For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission." You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning“. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　破题思路:

　　第一段: 解释引言内容. 提出文章的主旨 : “学习的重要性”

　　第二段: 分析原因 此处可以结合例子.

　　第三段: 得出结论

　　此文章写作时可以全面参照有道考神四级写作课程中“功能句”的讲解。

　　参考范文:

　　Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission. This is a proverb full of logic. In other words, learning is significant in our whole life. Indeed, we can learn many things from it. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

　　There are many reasons which can explain this phenomenon and the following are the typical ones. The first reason is that learning can light our road in the coming future. There is no denying the fact that the society is developing increasingly fast and we are often easily surpassed by the people around. The only way to avoid this is to learn to improve ourselves. As an illustration, I’d like to take myself as an example. After graduation from college, my life has been full of working pressure, which contributes to my decision of pursuing further education. That’s why I can make my own way in such a competitive society.

　　The effect of learning can be boiled down to two major ones. First, with the spirit of learning, we are more capable of overcoming the difficulties in the future. More importantly, we can enrich our spare time life by learning. No matter who you are, you must remember that learning is the basic skill in our life.